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Letter writing about rude behaviour complaint.

Letter writing about rude behaviour complaint. VB377
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the rude behaviour of the sports coach who takes care of the attendance of teachers in the morning. Firstly, I am Karishma, I have merely joined your school and have started getting acquainted with the rules. The rude incident that took place was in the morning of 11th May, when I was late by five minutes and Mr. Gurpreet Singh who is in charge of marking late in the morning started yelling for no reason. As a response, I still tried to be calm and said you can mark me late. He on the other hand due to the fact of his own insecurities, conveyed to the head of my department about my rude behaviour. This is something that is really disappointing as there is no credibility left when the staff doesnt have the basic moral values. Moreover, after this incident where things are twisted in such a way, the trust factor gets diminished altogether. I would really like you to do the investigation on this case based on humanitarian grounds. If the teachers around are carrying such lack of character, then working around such an environment would really be suffocating. It will be difficult to work in such an atmosphere. I look forward to some fair action against this irrelevant rude behaviour. Yours sincerely, Karishma
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the
rude
behaviour
of the sports coach who takes care of the attendance of teachers in the morning.
Firstly
, I am
Karishma
, I have
merely
joined
your school and have
started
getting acquainted with the
rules
. The
rude
incident that took place was in the morning of 11th May, when I was late by five minutes and Mr.
Gurpreet
Singh who is in charge of marking late in the morning
started
yelling for no reason. As a response, I
still
tried to be calm and said you can mark me late. He
on the other hand
due to the fact of his
own
insecurities, conveyed to the head of my department about my
rude
behaviour
. This is something
that is
really
disappointing as there is no credibility
left
when the staff
doesnt
have the basic moral values.
Moreover
, after this incident where things
are twisted
in such a way, the trust factor
gets
diminished altogether. I would
really
like you to do the investigation on this case based on humanitarian grounds. If the teachers around are carrying such lack of character, then working around such an environment would
really
be suffocating. It will be difficult to work in such an atmosphere. I look forward to
some
fair
action against this irrelevant
rude
behaviour
. Yours
sincerely
,
Karishma
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IELTS letter Letter writing about rude behaviour complaint.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
225 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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