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Write a letter inviting your friend to a family function. Tell him/her: What the occasion is What your plans are Why it is important he/she comes

Write a letter inviting your friend to a family function. Tell him/her: What the occasion is What your plans are Why it is important he/she comes 3adQb
Dear Rob, How have you been? it's been too long since we were last in touch. I am writing this letter to invite you on my niece's birthday. She is turning one, so on her first birthday, i am very exciting to invite my BFF. The function will be on 20th of this month. So, in the coming week we are going to meet after such a longtime. Moreover, the function day will start by religious ceremony, after this there'll be lunch for all and at around 4 pm. cake cutting ceremony will be done, following this the DJ songs will force everyone to dance. Lol! In simple words, the whole day seems busy and enjoyable. Are you excited for this enjoyment? Since we didn't meet from past two years i think it's a best chance to meet and spend some quality time with each other and we can have some gossip as well. On the other hand, i am not requesting you but of course ordering you to definitely come on this day. Give my warm wishes to your family. Hope to see on next week. I'll wait for you. Best Regards, Jan.
Dear Rob, How have you been?
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it
's been too long since we were last in touch. I am writing this letter to invite you on my niece's birthday. She is turning one,
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so
on her
first
birthday,
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i
am
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very
exciting to invite my BFF. The function will be on 20th of this month.
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So
, in the coming week we are going to
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meet
after such
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a longtime
.
Moreover
, the function day will
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start
by religious ceremony, after this there'll be lunch for all and at around 4 pm. cake cutting ceremony will
be done
, following this the DJ songs will force everyone to dance. Lol! In simple words, the whole day seems busy and enjoyable. Are you excited for this enjoyment? Since we didn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
from past two years
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
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think
it's
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a
best chance to
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meet
and spend
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some
quality time with each
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
other and
we can have
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some
gossip
as well
.
On the other hand
,
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i
am not requesting you
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but
of course
ordering you to definitely
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come
on this day. Give my warm wishes to your family. Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
on
next
week. I'll wait for you. Best Regards, Jan.
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IELTS letter Write a letter inviting your friend to a family function. Tell him/her: What the occasion is What your plans are Why it is important he/she comes

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
194 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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