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Finance project - Britvic PLC

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Dear friend, Yesterday I was trying to write something to you. However, it was difficult for me to do so due to challenging work. There is no need to talk about my university to you. However, I want to explain the situation briefly. We are approaching the end of spring semester. And when this happens, the instructors in all universities would love to challenge students. They assign various and arduous tasks to us. For this reason, I don't have enough time to do extracurricular activities such as improving writing skills or hanging out with my friends. On the other hand, you know me. I always do have time to do a few creative activities. Yesterday we were working out on finance project. Our instructor has assigned to us to do that project. Firstly, we ought to find a company that had annual reports publicly available, so we could us them to examine its statements easily. Besides financial analysis, we were going to analyze the company non-financially. We had a team to do that that contained of three students. One of us couldn't join us, due to his lack of knowledge on this. And I was responsible for doing financial analysis, and another was accountable for the non-financial part. Since we finished the project, I had asked my teacher to help us, and yesterday we did have a Zoom meeting to discuss our work. Luckily, he helped and gave numerous advice. Then, we were able to upload our work before the deadline.
Dear friend, Yesterday I was trying to write something to you.
However
, it was difficult for me to do
so
due to challenging work. There is no need to talk about my university to you.
However
, I want to
explain
the situation
briefly
. We are approaching the
end
of spring semester. And when this happens, the instructors in all universities would
love
to challenge students. They assign various and arduous tasks to us.
For this reason
, I don't have
enough
time to do extracurricular activities such as improving writing
skills
or hanging out with my friends.
On the other hand
, you know me. I always do have time to do a few creative activities. Yesterday we were working out on finance project. Our instructor has assigned to us to do that project.
Firstly
, we ought to find a
company
that had annual reports
publicly
available,
so
we could us them to examine its statements
easily
.
Besides
financial analysis, we were going to analyze the
company
non-
financially
. We had a team to do that that contained of three students. One of us couldn't
join
us, due to his lack of knowledge on this. And I was responsible for doing financial analysis, and another was accountable for the non-financial part. Since we finished the project, I had asked my teacher to
help
us, and yesterday we did have a Zoom meeting to discuss our work. Luckily, he
helped
and gave numerous advice. Then, we were able to upload our work
before
the deadline.
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IELTS letter Finance project - Britvic PLC

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
251 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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