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You are relocating back to your country. There is some furniture that you would like to return to your friend. In your letter tell them What furniture you will be giving back Detail on the condition of the furniture How they can come and collect the furniture

You are relocating back to your country. There is some furniture that you would like to return to your friend. In your letter tell them What furniture you will be giving back Detail on the condition of the furniture How they can come and collect the furniture QLpJP
Dear Mark, How have you been? It’s been too long since we were last in touch. I have an exciting news for you that my company, where I have been working since past ten years, they are planning to open their franchise in my home country, where I can join and stay with my family. When I came to this nation, you gave me home furniture to use a table and single bed. As you know, I can’t take them with me, so I decided to return them back to you. Both are in the good condition. As I spend majority of my time in office, I used them in limited amount of time. The color, condition is the same, when I took from you. I know your home is in far-distance. You can come with the pic-up van to collect the furniture and can spend some time with me. Hope to see you soon. Warm wishes, Rabia
Dear Mark,

How have you been? It’s been too long since we were last in touch. I have
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "exciting news".
an exciting news
for you that my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
, where I have been working since past ten years, they are planning to open their franchise in my home country, where I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
and stay with my family.

When I came to this nation, you gave me home furniture to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
a table and single bed. As you know, I can’t take them with me,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I decided to return them back to you.

Both are in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition. As I spend
It seems that an article is missing.
majority of
my time in office, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
them in limited amount of time. The color, condition is the same, when I took from you.

I know your home is in far-distance. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
with the pic-up van to collect the furniture and can spend
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
time with me.

Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Warm wishes,

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Rabia

IELTS letter You are relocating back to your country. There is some furniture that you would like to return to your friend. In your letter tell them What furniture you will be giving back Detail on the condition of the furniture How they can come and collect the furniture

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  American English
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157 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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