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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that my current living condition with my roommate in the university dorm is so awful, and I am not happy although the living condition and view is fine only my room mate is so very annoying and noisy that I cannot concentrate to my work or cannot study well. Let me explain to you my situation, every night until dawn my room always play with the computer games with a loud voice, and I cannot sleep early I cannot focus my study and cannot work my thesis. Even if I always told her to slow down his voice he will not listen and continue playing with his games. And he was so messy he does not know how to fix the things and put all his garbage properly. He was so disgusting. Would you kindly, transfer me or my roommate to another room? It would very appreciate for me if you could transfer me to another room. I do not mind if I do not have a nice view and I do not mind whom I live with as long I can peacefully study and work with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Jerick

Dear Sir or Madam,

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explain
 to you my situation, every night until dawn my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
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 always play with the computer games with a loud voice, and I cannot sleep early I cannot focus my study and cannot work my thesis. Even if I always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
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Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully
,

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