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you are an international student.You have borroved a book from a local library.You have lost it on a bus You called the bus organisation but they could not find.Write aletter to librarian.

you are an international student. You have borroved a book from a local library. You have lost it on a bus You called the bus organisation but they could not find. Write aletter to librarian. QLpEy
I am one of international students who visits your library frequently and borrows a book several times. We know that your library is full of variety of books. I have visited it recently and borrowed a book which is called "Science". It was necessary for my presentation at the University. I used it while I was sitting on a bus. When I reached my destination, I hurried and left this book on my seat. I adressed to the bus organisation several timesand received an answer which made me absolutely sad. As well as this all me efforts were nonsense ad it was disgusting. Now I do not know what to do. I will be pleased if you give me your viable advice. I am looking forward to hearing you as soon as possible. Please do not gesitate me if you want to call me. My phone number is given below my adress. Yours faithfully, Nodira
I am one of international students who visits your library
frequently
and borrows a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
several times. We know that your library is full of variety of
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books
. I have visited it recently and borrowed a
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book
which
is called
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"
Science
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"
. It was necessary for my presentation at the University. I
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used
it while I was sitting on a bus. When I reached my destination, I hurried and
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left
this
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book
on my seat. I
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adressed
to the bus
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organisation
several
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timesand
received an answer which made me
absolutely
sad.
As well
as this all me efforts were nonsense ad it was disgusting.
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Now
I do not know what to do. I will be
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pleased
if you give me your viable advice. I am looking forward to hearing you as
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soon
as possible.
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Please
do not
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gesitate
me if you want to call me. My phone number is
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given
below my
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adress
. Yours
faithfully
,
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Nodira
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IELTS letter you are an international student. You have borroved a book from a local library. You have lost it on a bus You called the bus organisation but they could not find. Write aletter to librarian.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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