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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly, Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours, Suggest what should be done about the problem

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly, Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours, Suggest what should be done about the problem JoLOk

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to intend you for taking the action against the garbage collection system. I live in west of London on bank street where we have been facing disturbance from your system which was not precisely working for last week. We have noticed that from last week onward, Garbage was not collected from the dustbins and its smell annoying to everyone nearby which can lead to serious health issue afterwards. There might chance to get infection to kids. In addition, my neighbors complained too, regarding this all people are disturbed and could not sleep properly because of wierd smell. Hence, my kind request to take a strict action against this, if possible deploy new vehicle to carry the waste to avoid critical circumstances. I will be waiting for your prompt step. You cal call me on my cell (94586 48569) if required. Yours faithfully, John

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours faithfully
, John

IELTS letter The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly, Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours, Suggest what should be done about the problem

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

151 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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