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Write a letter to a friend mentioning that the product which you borrowed from him/her got accidently damaged. What is the item which you borrowed How it got damaged? What would you do from your end?

Write a letter to a friend mentioning that the product which you borrowed from him/her got accidently damaged. What is the item which you borrowed How it got damaged? What would you do from your end? RNyaQ
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits of life. I am in a quandary as to how to acquaint you about the pendant that I had borrowed from you the day before yesterday. I am extremely sorry for not taking proper care of your belonging. Last night, on the reception of my cousin, I wore the pendant. I got a lot of compliments because it was exactly matching with my dress. After attending the party, I kept it on the dressing table and suddenly my niece came there and started fiddling with it. Unfortunately, it skipped from her hand and broke. I know you will be upset on me because it was really close to your heart, but everything was happened unintentionally. In order to compensate, I am ready to pay for new pendant or if you want then I can also purchase new one akin to old. Please accept my apology for this blunder.
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits of life. I am in a quandary as to how to acquaint you about the pendant that I had borrowed from you the day
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I
am
extremely
sorry for not taking proper care of your belonging.

Last night, on the reception of my cousin, I wore the pendant. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
compliments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it was exactly matching with my dress. After attending the party, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
it on the dressing table and
suddenly
my niece came there and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
fiddling with it. Unfortunately, it skipped from her hand and broke.

I know you will
be upset
on me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it was
really
close to your heart,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
everything
was happened
unintentionally
. In order to compensate, I am ready to pay for new pendant or if you want then I can
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
new one akin to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my apology for this blunder.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend mentioning that the product which you borrowed from him/her got accidently damaged. What is the item which you borrowed How it got damaged? What would you do from your end?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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