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A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there 2brNw
Dear Smith, Hope you're doing well. I was so excited after receiving your letter. I cannot believe that my best childhood friend is moving to Dubai. Congratulations on the new job! I know you have worked so hard for it. As you have asked me to tell you about life in Dubai. Let me mesmerize you with the best parts first. the best thing about Dubai is that there are so many beaches and parks, I hope you won't get bored with all the barbeque parties that I am going to take you to. There's a skating park in ivy town and I know that you love to skate on weekends so it will be perfect for you. As for your living arrangements, I have found an astonishing studio apartment for you in ivy town itself, it has an outstanding view of the city skyline. The best thing is that the studio is just 5 minutes walk from the metro and bus station. Public transport is the worst in the city, almost everyone here uses the metro. so the best thing is that you will have a place near a metro station and will never be late for work, as you will be able to get there quickly. You're lucky that your best friend found you a place near the metro. and don't worry about your social life, I have a huge social circle, I am sure you will fit right in. I have told my friends about you and they can't wait to meet you, and if you don't like my friends, we can always find you new friends by visiting the community center. We can find people from different countries and cultures there. plus, there are so many events happening in the city, so making new friends won't be a problem. I look forward to welcoming you and remembering the good old days and making new memories with you. Love, John
Dear Smith,

Hope you're doing well. I was
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excited after receiving your letter. I cannot believe that my
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best
childhood
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friend
is moving to Dubai. Congratulations on the
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new
job! I know you have worked
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so
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for it.

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you have asked me to
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tell
you about life in Dubai.
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Let
me mesmerize you with the
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best
parts
first
.
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the
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best
thing about Dubai is that there are
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so
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many
beaches and parks, I hope you won't
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bored with all the
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barbeque
parties that I am going to take you to. There's a skating park in ivy town and I know that you
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love
to skate on weekends
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so
it will be perfect for you. As for your living arrangements, I have found an astonishing studio apartment for you in ivy town itself, it has an outstanding view of the city skyline. The
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best
thing is that the studio is
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just
5 minutes walk from the
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metro
and bus station.

Public transport is the worst in the city, almost everyone here
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uses
the
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metro
.
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so
the
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best
thing is that you will have a place near a
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metro
station and will never be late for work, as you will be able to
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get
there
quickly
. You're lucky that your
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best
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friend
found you a place near the
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metro
.
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and
don't worry about your social life, I have a huge social circle, I am sure you will fit right in. I have
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told
my
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friends
about you and they can't wait to
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meet
you, and if you don't like my
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friends
, we can always find you
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new
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friends
by visiting the community center. We can find
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people
from
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different
countries and cultures there.
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plus
, there are
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so
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many
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events
happening in the city,
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so
making
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new
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friends
won't be a problem.

I look forward to welcoming you and remembering the
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good
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old
days and making
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new
memories with you.

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Love
,

John
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IELTS letter A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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  American English
7 paragraphs
322 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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