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A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • Describe some possible disadvantages • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer xmgBo

Dear Romisha, Hope you are fine. It is being long since we talk. I am writing this to give you some advice about your camping visit of Kumrat valley this summer. Kumrat is a beautiful valley and best place for camping because there is no hotel situated there and all people who visit this place live in camps. You will enjoy a camping holiday in Kumrat because weather, view, atmosphere are suitable for camping. River Kumrat flows in the Valley. Though camping is a best adventure but there is some disadvantages of camping especially for the new person who did not experience any camping before. You may find difficulty in burning of fire because of the cool breeze. There is also problem in cooking of food because due to height air pressure is low and food need more time to cook. Weather is a main enemy there. Weather always gives you challenge whether you go there in summer or winter. It was my dream to visit this valley with my friends. I already visited this with my family, but you know that enjoyment level is different when you somewhere with your buddy. I am free from work this summer so I would love to join you in this tour and enjoy the camping of beautiful Kumrat valley. I am so excited about this visit. Yours sincerely. x. y. z

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Romisha
,

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some
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Kumrat
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valley
 this summer.

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Kumrat
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beautiful
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valley
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because
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people
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live
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Kumrat
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because
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Kumrat
 flows in the Valley.

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a
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but
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some
 disadvantages of camping especially
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before
. You may find difficulty in burning of fire This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the cool breeze. There is also
 problem in cooking of food This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 due to height air pressure is low and food need more time to cook. Weather is a main enemy there. Weather always gives you challenge whether you go there in summer or winter.

It was my dream to visit this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgorgecanyonbasinplainlowland
valley
 with my friends. I already visited this with my family, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you know that enjoyment level is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 when you somewhere with your buddy. I am free from work this summer This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 you in this tour and enjoy the camping of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
Possible spelling mistake found.KurtSuratKmartMuratKaratKumquat
Kumrat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgorgecanyonbasinplainlowland
valley
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 excited about this visit.

Yours sincerely
.

x. y. z