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You are thinking of starting the same course which your friend took last year. You have some questions about this course.

You are thinking of starting the same course which your friend took last year. You have some questions about this course. rYE9l
Dear John, It is great to hear from you after such a long time. I am so happy for you on your decision to apply for the Master’s degree program in industrial engineering at University of Houston. Let me share some details about this course. It is a 33 credits degree program and takes 1. 5 to 2 years to graduate. There will be 21 credits from the core courses and you will have the flexibility to take 12 credits worth of courses from any other branch. Given that you have a similar background as mine, this course will be a great value addition to you. Apart from the course itself, you will have a chance to study in one of the best universities in the USA. The research faculties are very well reputed here and there is an equal focus on gaining practical experience. Besides that, this is one of the most culturally diverse universities in the country and you will feel at home. I do want to inform you that if you are really planning to join the school in the next fall semester, you should apply as early as possible. You can submit all your information through the online portal as well as pay the application fees. Don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any question and keep me posted! Best regards, ABC
Dear John,

It is great to hear from you after such a long time. I am
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happy for you on your decision to apply for the Master’s degree program in industrial engineering at University of Houston.

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me share
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about this
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. It is a 33 credits degree program and takes 1. 5 to 2 years to graduate. There will be 21 credits from the core
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courses
and you will have the flexibility to take 12 credits worth of
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courses
from any other branch.
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Given
that you have a similar background as mine, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
will be a great value addition to you.

Apart from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
itself, you will have a chance to study in one of the best universities in the USA. The research faculties are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well reputed here and there is an equal focus on gaining practical experience.
Besides
that, this is one of the most
culturally
diverse universities in the country and you will feel at home.

I do want to inform you that if you are
really
planning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the school in the
next
fall semester, you should apply as early as possible. You can submit all your information through the online portal
as well
as pay the application fees.

Don’t hesitate to reach out if you have any question and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
me posted!

Best regards,

ABC

IELTS letter You are thinking of starting the same course which your friend took last year. You have some questions about this course.

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