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Complaint letter about my partner

Complaint letter about my partner 5bJdm
Dear Sir: I would like to express my dissatisfaction with my partner named Tom Smith I lived since I entered University last year. I entered University last year and I have to stay there and you gave me a room which I may live there. But I have a problem with my. Because now I have an exam for my sophomore year. And I have to prepare for an exam. But I don’t prepare because of my roommate’s everyday actions. Firstly, he always bothered me when I read a book or listen to music extramely loud. As well as he doesn’t help me to do cleaning works in the room. In addition, my roommate engages with kinds of techniques. Therefore, he always interferes with my reading by making noise with his equipments. Besides, every day his friends come to the room to talk, so I can not prepare for my essentional exam. I would be appreciate with you if you take into consideration to my comments. And as a regular student I would be very pleased, if you give me another room because I can not live together with him anymore. I wish to draw your attention to my comments and I look forward to your prompt reply. Your faithfully John Brown.
Dear Sir:

I would like to express my dissatisfaction with my partner named Tom Smith I
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lived
since I entered University last year.

I entered University last year and I
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have to
stay there and you gave me a
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room
which I may
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live
there.
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But
I have a problem with my.
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Because
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now
I have an exam for my sophomore year. And I
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have to
prepare for an exam.
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But
I don’t prepare
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because
of my roommate’s everyday actions.
Firstly
, he always bothered me when I read a book or listen to music
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extramely
loud.
As well
as he doesn’t
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help
me to do cleaning works in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
.
In addition
, my roommate engages with kinds of techniques.
Therefore
, he always interferes with my reading by making noise with his equipments.
Besides
, every day his friends
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come
to the
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room
to talk,
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so
I can not prepare for my
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essentional
exam.

I would be
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appreciate
with you if you take into consideration to my comments. And as a regular student I would be
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very
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pleased
, if you give me another
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room
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because
I can not
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live
together with him anymore. I wish to draw your attention to my comments and I look forward to your prompt reply.

Your
faithfully


John Brown.

IELTS letter Complaint letter about my partner

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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