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Complaint letter about my roommate

Complaint letter about my roommate Ba6bw

Dear Sir: I would like to express my dissatisfaction with my partner named Tom Smith I lived since I entered University last year. I entered University last year and I have to stay there and you gave me an area which I may live there. On the contrary I have a problem with my. Because now I have an exam for my sophomore year. And I have to prepare for an exam. But I don’t prepare because of my roommate’s everyday actions. Firstly, he always bothered me when I read a book or listen to music extremely loud. As well as he doesn’t help me to do cleaning works in the room. In addition, my roommate engages with kinds of techniques. Therefore, he always interferes with my reading by making noise with his equipments. Besides, every day his friends come to the room to talk, consequent I can not prepare for my essential exam. I would be appreciated with you if you take into consideration to my comments. And as a regular student I would be very pleased, if you give me another place because I can not live together with him anymore. I wish to draw your attention to my comments and I look forward to your prompt reply. Your faithfully John Brown.

Dear Sir:

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have to
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But
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because
 of my roommate’s everyday actions. Firstly
, he always bothered me when I read a book or listen to music extremely
 loud. As well
 as he doesn’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to do cleaning works in the room. In addition
, my roommate engages with kinds of techniques. Therefore
, he always interferes with my reading by making noise with his equipments. Besides
, every day his friends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the room to talk, consequent I can not prepare for my essential exam.

I would be appreciated
 with you if you take into consideration to my comments. And as a regular student I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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pleased
, if you give me another place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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live
 together with him anymore. I wish to draw your attention to my comments and I look forward to your prompt reply.

Your faithfully


John Brown. 