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Interfering clasmate whis his problams

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Dear Mr. Director I am writing to complain about my roommate. He is a computer programmer. He always press the button loudly and it is interfering me. About myself. My friends colled me Tom and I am studying 234th group. I wil always be on good terms with him, but thera are some inconvenience with him. When I am reading he sees different videos on YouTube chanel. And I get it right. Maybe, he need see this videos. but this videos prevents me from concentrating. Please solve this problam. Maybe it would be nice if you could change my room. And put a student like me in this room. And I look forward to hearing from youYour student Tom
Dear Mr. Director

I am writing to complain about my roommate. He is a computer programmer. He always
The pronoun 'He' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "presses", "pressed".
press
the button
loudly
and it is interfering me. About myself. My friends
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colled
me
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Tom and
I am studying 234th group. I
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wil
The adverb 'always' usually goes after the verb 'be'.
always be
on
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good
terms with him,
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but
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thera
are
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some
inconvenience with him.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
I am reading he
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sees
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
videos on YouTube
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chanel
. And I
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get
it right. Maybe, he need
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see
Did you mean "these"?
this
videos.
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but
Did you mean "these"?
this
videos
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prevents
me from concentrating.

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Please
solve this
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problam
. Maybe it would be nice if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
my room. And put a student like me in this room.

And I look forward to hearing from
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youYour
student Tom

IELTS letter Interfering clasmate whis his problams

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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