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You are thinking of starting a club. You want to inform potential members for the same.

You are thinking of starting a club. You want to inform potential members for the same. nRmlg

Dear Sir, My name is Devanshi and I am writing this letter for starting for a motivational and fitness club, which is located in Manjalpur area, Vadodara. In this club I like to start some classes such as motivation, yoga, meditation and reading sessions which is helpful to those people who are always in depress and think negatively. So it is the more beneficial for those people to release the stress and stay positive in their life. We also share how to generate new ideas and work on that which is extremely good for youth and current generation. I meeting with you on 26th June, Sunday at Royal hotel around 8: 00 am. We discuss about how to set up classes on this club and also how to advertise in our local are and television about our club. I hope I hear you from as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Devanshi Patel.

Dear Sir,

My name is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Devanshi, and
Devanshi and
 I am writing this letter for starting for a motivational and fitness club, which is located
 in Possible spelling mistake found.JabalpurManipur
Manjalpur
 area, Vadodara.

In this club I like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 classes such as motivation, yoga, meditation and reading sessions which is helpful to those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are always in depress and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
negatively
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 it is the more beneficial for those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to release the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and stay This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 in their life. We also
 share how to generate new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 and work on that which is extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for youth and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 generation.

Did you mean "I'm meeting", "I am meeting", or "I was meeting"?I'm meetingI am meetingI was meeting
I meeting
 with you on 26th June, Sunday at Royal hotel around 8: 00 am. We Did you mean simply "discuss how"? You do not need the word "about" here.discuss how
discuss about how
 to set up classes on this club and also
 how to advertise in our local are and television about our club.

I hope I hear you from as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Deanship
Devanshi
 Patel. 