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A large company needs a sales manager.Choose one of the joba and write application letter.

A large company needs a sales manager. Choose one of the joba and write application letter. BlG6p
I decided to apply for the job of sales manager in your company which was advertised in financial magazine "Economy". I am 35 years old. At a present I am employed at the supermarket "Macro" as a sales assistant. I obtained a degree in teaching English and literature at National University of Uzbekistan in 2008. It means that mý command of English and Russian are better. As you know the foreign languages are reqired more in this sphere. I have different cirtificates which prove my attendable qualities. According my character I approaches every task with all my capacity. As I am punctual and easygoing person, to attitude and work corporate is very pleasant. I apreciate the time. I prefer to outperform every task which would be entrusted me. I was high evaluated from my present job's administration for my organizational capability. As I mentioned before, I have organizational feature that I make appoinments easy. I feel that I am well qualified for this position. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Usmonova Aziza.
I decided to apply for the job of sales manager in your
company
which
was advertised
in financial magazine
"
Economy
"
. I am 35 years
old
. At a present I
am employed
at the supermarket
"
Macro
"
as a sales assistant. I obtained a degree in teaching English and literature at National University of Uzbekistan in 2008. It means that
command of English and Russian are better.
As
you know the foreign languages are
reqired
more in this sphere. I have
different
cirtificates
which prove my
attendable
qualities.
According my
character I
approaches
every task with all my capacity. As I am punctual and easygoing person, to attitude and work corporate is
very
pleasant. I
apreciate
the time. I prefer to outperform every task which would
be entrusted
me.
I
was high evaluated from my present job's administration for my organizational capability. As I mentioned
before
, I have organizational feature that I
make
appoinments
easy. I feel that I am well qualified for this position. I would be grateful if you could consider me for this job.
I
look forward to hearing from you
soon
. Yours
faithfully
,
Usmonova
Aziza
.
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IELTS letter A large company needs a sales manager. Choose one of the joba and write application letter.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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