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Informal letter for internship

Informal letter for internship 11LqG
Dear Prof. Paolo Emanuele Levi Setti, I am Mirunalini Pandian, a 5th year medical student from Humanitas University writing this mail to request an opportunity to shadow in your department. As per my syllabus for 5th year, I am required to spend one week (20/10/20 to 26/10/20) in any department for my clinical log. And I am very interested in the field of Gynaecology and Obstetrics. I hope that you might be willing to let me observe you or any doctor in this field so I can learn more about this career path. I understand that your time is valuable but I can assure you that I will be of no disturbance to your usual schedule. If you are open to my request, please let me know at your earliest. Thankyou and have a nice day, Mirunalini Pandian
Dear Prof. Paolo
Emanuele
Levi
Setti
,

I am
Mirunalini
Pandian
, a 5th year medical student from
Humanitas
University writing this mail to request an opportunity to shadow in your department.

As per my syllabus for 5th year, I
am required
to spend one week (20/10/20 to 26/10/20) in any department for my clinical log. And I am
very
interested in the field of
Gynaecology
and Obstetrics. I hope that you might be willing to
let
me observe you or any doctor in this field
so
I can learn more about this career path. I understand that your time is valuable
but
I can assure you that I will be of no disturbance to your usual schedule.

If you are open to my request,
please
let
me know at your earliest.

Thankyou
and have a nice day,

Mirunalini
Pandian
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IELTS letter Informal letter for internship

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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