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You are the member of travel club. You received this e-mail from the club.

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How it going I have been meaning to write you for a long time. Things have been up and down. As you know, I am very fond of travelling, in addition to reading books about trip. Also I have joined a travel club. The club organised a chance meeting with well-known travel writer Mr David Price. Unfortunately, he would not praticipate the forum. I was very dissapoented with this situation. If he had come, I would have some questions about his new book around The world in Eighty Eays. However, he did not attend meeting. I am going to buy a copy at the price at twenty-five pounds. Let me know what's been going on with you. Talk soon
How
Did you mean "it's going", "it is going", or "it was going"?
it going
I have been meaning to write you for a long time. Things have been up and down. As you know, I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
fond of travelling,
in addition
to reading books about trip.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
a travel club. The club
Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.
organised
a chance meeting with well-known travel writer Mr David Price. Unfortunately, he would not
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praticipate
the forum. I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
Possible spelling mistake found.
dissapoented
with this situation. If he had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
, I would have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
questions about his new book around The world in Eighty
Possible spelling mistake found.
Eays
.
However
, he did not attend meeting. I am going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a copy at the price at twenty-five pounds.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know what's been going on with you. Talk
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
soon
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IELTS letter You are the member of travel club. You received this e-mail from the club.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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