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Write an email to the secretary of the club

Write an email to the secretary of the club Wn0KD
Dear Madam My name is Susan Whitby and I am the member of a travel club. It was nice talking to you on the phone earlier. I am writing to discuss about the meeting. As you say earlier Mr David Price could not attend the club forum so that I do not want to buy copy of the book, because I want to meet with him and asking some questions about the book. I am very disappointed because I want to sign copies of his new book. Could you please organize conference next week. Feel free do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to seeing next week. Your sincerely Susan
Dear Madam

My name is Susan
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Whitby and
I am the member of a travel club. It was nice talking to you on the phone earlier. I am writing to
Did you mean simply "discuss the"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discuss about the
meeting. As you say earlier Mr David Price could not attend the club forum
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so
that I do not want to
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buy
copy of the book,
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because
I want to
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meet
with him and asking
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some
questions about the book. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
disappointed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sign
copies of his new book. Could you
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please
organize conference
next
week. Feel free do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to seeing
next
week.

Your
sincerely
Susan

IELTS letter Write an email to the secretary of the club

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  American English
2 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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