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Write an email to the secretary of the club

Write an email to the secretary of the club Wn0KD

Dear Madam My name is Susan Whitby and I am the member of a travel club. It was nice talking to you on the phone earlier. I am writing to discuss about the meeting. As you say earlier Mr David Price could not attend the club forum so that I do not want to buy copy of the book, because I want to meet with him and asking some questions about the book. I am very disappointed because I want to sign copies of his new book. Could you please organize conference next week. Feel free do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to seeing next week. Your sincerely Susan

Dear Madam

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Whitby and
 I am the member of a travel club. It was nice talking to you on the phone earlier. I am writing to Did you mean simply "discuss the"? You do not need the word "about" here.discuss the
discuss about the
 meeting. As you say earlier Mr David Price could not attend the club forum This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I do not want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 copy of the book, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 with him and asking This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 questions about the book. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disappointed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :indication
sign
 copies of his new book. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 organize conference next
 week. Feel free do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to seeing next
 week.

Your sincerely
 Susan