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letter to Giorgio about answering two questions

letter to Giorgio about answering two questions Vwkx7
Hi Giorgia, I have Wi-Fi in my room but it is usually slow and busy. I have problem with it because I cannot download and even speak online with my parents. Fortunately, the food is good. I don’t need to spend time for cooking. They give me various meals with appetizer. Good news about my campus is, it takes 5 minute to me arrive university. how long does it take to you? And also tell me about your friend there? Write soon Gavin
Hi
Giorgia
,

I have Wi-Fi in my room
but
it is
usually
slow and busy. I have problem

with it
because
I cannot download and even speak online with my

parents.
Fortunately
, the food is
good
. I don’t need to spend time for

cooking. They give me various meals with appetizer.
Good
news about

my campus is, it takes 5 minute to me arrive university.
how
long does it

take to you? And
also
tell
me about your friend there?

Write
soon


Gavin
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IELTS letter letter to Giorgio about answering two questions

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
82 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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