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letter to Giorgio about answering two questions

letter to Giorgio about answering two questions Vwkx7

Hi Giorgia, I have Wi-Fi in my room but it is usually slow and busy. I have problem with it because I cannot download and even speak online with my parents. Fortunately, the food is good. I don’t need to spend time for cooking. They give me various meals with appetizer. Good news about my campus is, it takes 5 minute to me arrive university. how long does it take to you? And also tell me about your friend there? Write soon Gavin

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Giorgia
,

I have Wi-Fi in my room This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is usually
 slow and busy. I have problem

with it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I cannot download and even speak online with my

parents. Fortunately
, the food is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. I don’t need to spend time for

cooking. They give me various meals with appetizer. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
Good
 news about

my campus is, it takes 5 minute to me arrive university. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHow
how
 long does it

take to you? And also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me about your friend there?

Write This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon


Gavin

IELTS letter letter to Giorgio about answering two questions

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

82 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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