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Write a letter of application. Apply for a waitress position in restaurant.

Write a letter of application. Apply for a waitress position in restaurant. nXmW7

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to apply for a job of a waitress at your restaurant which I saw advertised in " Today's" newspaper. I am twenty eight years old and my experience and qualifications fit exactly to your needs. I have worked in five star hotel and I can speak the local languages as well as good English. I also have good experience in communicating with hotel customers. In addition to this I participate in culinary courses. I learned the ins and outs of the industry, including food handling techniques and how to take orders efficiently in a 120+ seat restaurant. I am currently looking for a position that will allow me to develop my skills and experience. I enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers and running. I am sociable and I can get on well with new people easily. If you would like me to attend an interview. I would be able to come to any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your restaurant. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfully Karimova Feruza

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing to apply for a job of a waitress at your restaurant which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 advertised in Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbolapply
" 
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
'sUse a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
 newspaper.

I am This word is normally spelled with hyphen.twenty-eight
twenty eight
 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and my experience and qualifications fit exactly to your needs. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have worked in 'five star' is missing a hyphen.five-star
five star
Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: "hotels".hotels
hotel
 and I can speak the local languages as well
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 English. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 experience in communicating with hotel customers. In addition
 to this I participate in culinary courses. I learned the ins and outs of the industry, including food handling techniques and how to take orders efficiently
 in a 120+ seat restaurant. I am currently
 looking for a position that will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to develop my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and experience.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 enjoy several outdoor activities such as planting flowers and running. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am sociable and I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 on well with new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
easily
.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)liked
would like
 me to attend an interview. I would be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to any time convenient to you, as I do want to be a member of your restaurant.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Your faithfully


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