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. You are a player of any game. You played a league match in other city where you faced a hostile crowd on the ground. You were unhappy with the administration's security arrangement on the ground. Write a letter to the administration to convey your frustration. In your letter • describe what happened • what sorts of problems you or your teammates faced • say what you want the administration to do in future

. You are a player of any game. You played a league match in other city where you faced a hostile crowd on the ground. You were unhappy with the administration's security arrangement on the ground. Write a letter to the administration to convey your frustration. In your letter • describe what happened • what sorts of problems you or your teammates faced • say what you want the administration to do in future 5aV7D
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to share my team experience regarding the security arrangements of your ground. Last weekend, we played a match with Rock Players in Delhi Ground and after match a section of crowd came out in the ground and started clicking pictures with our team members without their permission. Therefore, my team members faced security issues; moreover, the moral of team goes down, being a captain I have to ensure the safety of my players; henceforth, we decided told the coming matches in your stadium. Furthermore, we want an assurance from your side in writing regarding safety measures while match of our players and shared that measures with us before the next match. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nikita.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to share my
team
experience regarding the security arrangements of your ground.

Last weekend, we played a
match
with Rock Players in Delhi Ground and after
match
a section of crowd came out in the ground and
started
clicking pictures with our
team
members without their permission.

Therefore
, my
team
members faced security issues;
moreover
, the moral of
team
goes down, being a captain I
have to
ensure the safety of my players; henceforth, we decided
told
the coming
matches
in your stadium.

Furthermore
, we want an assurance from your side in writing regarding safety measures while
match
of our players and shared that measures with us
before
the
next
match.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Nikita.
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IELTS letter . You are a player of any game. You played a league match in other city where you faced a hostile crowd on the ground. You were unhappy with the administration's security arrangement on the ground. Write a letter to the administration to convey your frustration. In your letter • describe what happened • what sorts of problems you or your teammates faced • say what you want the administration to do in future

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  American English
8 paragraphs
129 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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