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You are the Agony Aunt who gives advice to problems young people have. Read Brian's email and write back giving advice on what he should do. Last year my mum and dad divorced, and now she's seeing another man. Whenever he's at our house they don't take notice of me at all. Sometimes I get the feeling that mum doesn't care about me anymore. When we all go for a walk together, they always walk in front with their arms around each other and never look back to me. I feel so alone and left out. What can I do?

You are the Agony Aunt who gives advice to problems young people have. Read Brian's email and write back giving advice on what he should do. Last year my mum and dad divorced, and now she's seeing another man. Whenever he's at our house they don't take notice of me at all. Sometimes I get the feeling that mum doesn't care about me anymore. When we all go for a walk together, they always walk in front with their arms around each other and never look back to me. I feel so alone and left out. What can I do? 3WVRm

Dear Brian, I just got your letter and I think I can help you. I have got some suggessions for you. Here are what I think you should do. Nowadays, people's opinions are changing day by day. By the way, your mother has changed her life style. After divorcing, your mother feels herself lonely. I think everybody needs love. Your mother also to be loved. you should give her chance for choosing her partner. If you love your mother as a son, she likes you as a mom in its turn. she always takes care of you. You should change your life style. Go somewhere, meet a new friend, do something interesting for you which makes you happy. In a few days you may also come up to a wise opinion about your Mom. I hope you will do it in a proper way. Let me know whatever happens. Love, Aunt Agony

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