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inviting friend go to a picnic

inviting friend go to a picnic 70oM6

Hi Nhiee It’s been a minute. I’m okay and hope you and your family same from me. Recently, my work have had up to my ears, I quite stressed. So, what do you think about having a picnic at the weekend. I’d drop a line right now to tell you about my idea. About the picnic, firsly we should choose a approriate place to have a picnic. A park, or beach, or any lake. It’s up to you but you ought to choose place which has delightful view. Secondly, would you like to take a photo in that, I think it really interested. We will have many gorgeous photos. Oh, why don’t we set a group concept. That’s sound great. I hope my picnic is excited. Then, we have to prepare fruits, food and juice or you can prepare beer or wine. I really expected that. We can travel by motobike or travel car. Do you prefer to? We already ready for a picnic, only you don’t have answer. So do you think about that? Do you have time to joined with us? Please write soon for me! I looking forward your reply letter. Hope all alright. Best wished K Trang

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motobike
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Best wished

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