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You are a passenger of an airline company and during the flight you feel extremely unsatisfactory to the service. Please write a letter of complaints to the company. In your letter, you should: Say how you are ignored. Give some suggestion to fix the problem. Tell the airlines that further action will be taken if the problem remains solved.

You are a passenger of an airline company and during the flight you feel extremely unsatisfactory to the service. Please write a letter of complaints to the company. In your letter, you should: Say how you are ignored. Give some suggestion to fix the problem. Tell the airlines that further action will be taken if the problem remains solved. kLDBK

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction. I am your regular customer. I have travelled number of times in your airline. In my last trip, I was not pleased due to your service. I was travelling from India to Canada in last month. I told to one your staffs that I want coffee. Since I was not feeling well. Your staff showed me many times but did not bring coffee for me. I do not think so that they have been given any proper training. In my opinion, you must always make visit to your airline as a customer. There should be a complaint box or suggestion box so that consumer can voice their views. Apart from that, if staff needs any training you must provide it. I have to go again in India in the same flight. If I would find any reiterate errors, I would bring this issue on twitter and make video about your service. Hoping for a prompt action! Yours faithfully, Deepak Madne

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction. I am your regular customer. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have travelled number of times in your airline. In my last trip, I was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 due to your service.

I was travelling from India to Canada in last month. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
The verb 'to tell someone' does not require a preposition.one
to one
 your staffs that I want coffee. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 I was not feeling well. Your staff This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 did not bring coffee for me. I do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 any proper training.

In my opinion, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 visit to your airline as a customer. There should be a complaint box or suggestion box This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that consumer can voice their views. Apart from that, if staff needs any training you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 provide it.

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go again in India in the same flight. If I Consider removing 'would'. (Usually, 'would' does not occur in a conditional clause, unless to make a request or give a polite order.)found
would find
 any reiterate errors, I would bring this issue on twitter and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 video about your service.

Hoping for a prompt action!

Yours faithfully
,

Deepak Possible spelling mistake found.MadeMaineMarneManeMadgeMad ne
Madne