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inviting friend come to birthday party

inviting friend come to birthday party o5adD

Hi YnNhee It’s a been since I’ve heard from you. I’m okay and hope you same from me. Do you have free time this weekend. I want invite you to come to my birthday party. So I wrote this letter right now to say about that. Since i want to create a warm atmostphere, my birthday party will take place/ organised at my home, so don’t worried that you’ll lose the road. I also invite more close friend in my team. We will relaxed together and have the wonderful birthday party. I think you should bring a bikini because my garden has a swimming pool. Pool birthday party isn’t a bad idea. I also prepare many food, beer, quizzez and game to we enjoy that. Well, that’s all for now. Please write soon for me. I can’t wait to hear what’s you’ve been up to. Everyone also looking forward hearing news from you. Love all K Trang

Hi Possible spelling mistake found.Yankee
YnNhee


It’s Did you mean only "a" or "been"?abeen
a been
 since I’ve heard from you. I’m okay and hope you same from me. Do you have free time this weekend. I want invite you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to my birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I wrote this letter right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 to say about that.

Since Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to create a warm Possible spelling mistake found.atmosphere
atmostphere
, my birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will take place/ Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 at my home, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 don’t worried that you’ll lose the road. I also
 invite more close friend in my team. We will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "relax"relax
relaxed
 together and have the wonderful birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you should bring a bikini This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my garden has a swimming pool. Pool birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 isn’t a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. I also
 prepare Use "much" or "little" with uncountable nouns.muchlittle
many
 food, beer, Possible spelling mistake found.quizzesquizzedquizzer
quizzez
 and game to we enjoy that.

Well, that’s all for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 write This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 for me. I can’t wait to hear what’s you’ve been up to. Everyone also
 looking forward hearing news from you.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 all

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K Trang