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WRITING A LETTER TO COOKING DIRECTOR

WRITING A LETTER TO COOKING DIRECTOR AJe1l

Dear Sir / Madam My name is Iram who recently attended to the cooking classes from one of your branch. I am writing this letter to provide some feedback about my experience in cooking academy. I appreciate for numerous skills learned from the course. The important reason I was interested in cooking classes because of the simple and variety of techniques. Previously I usually searched on internet that result showed a number of complex and difficult recipes that made me give up cooking. however, throughout the program I learned a lot of cooking recipes which require only few ingredients. Now I am cooking every day for my family. When I go out for picnic with my friends I also use too to cook for them. I wish I have firsthand experience of making deserts which is little difficult for me. there is number of unique ingredients and cutlery that are used while making deserts. I would be glad to have opportunity to learn about it. Thank you for your consideration in advance. Your faithfully Iram anwar

Dear Sir / Madam

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Iram
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some
 feedback about my experience in cooking academy. I appreciate for numerous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 learned from the course.

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a lot of
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 too to cook for them.

I wish I have firsthand Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "experienced".experienced
experience
 of making deserts which is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 difficult for me. there is number of unique ingredients and cutlery that are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 while making deserts.

I would be glad to have opportunity to learn about it. Thank you for your consideration in advance.

Your faithfully


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