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You are studying abroad. You must return home before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter - Explain why you need to leave early - Request time off - Reassure your professor that this will not affect your studies

You are studying abroad. You must return home before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter - Explain why you need to leave early - Request time off - Reassure your professor that this will not affect your studies LBEy8
Dr. Mr. Zwick, I am Margo Wright, a current student in the chemical engineering program at the Humber University. I am writing this letter to get approval on leave for my home country before finishing the final semester. My family has planned an urgent event that is very essential for me to attend, and so I have to go before the end of this semester. My brother is getting married next month, and there are lots of preparation to be done before the event. I am responsible for certain traditional and religious practices. Furthermore, I would be a great support to my parents. I request to approve 3 weeks of my time off the studies as it is sufficient for me to travel back and forth, also attend the event. I already checked with the academic advisor that in these weeks only certain practical experiments are to be repeated. Thus, there is no negative impact on my studies. I hope to hear back from you soon and I appreciate your understanding. Yours sincerely, Margo Wright
Dr. Mr.
Zwick
,

I am Margo Wright, a
current
student in the chemical engineering program at the Humber University. I am writing this letter to
get
approval on
leave
for my home country
before
finishing the final semester.

My family has planned an urgent
event
that is
very
essential for me to attend, and
so
I
have to
go
before
the
end
of this semester. My brother is getting married
next
month, and there are lots of preparation to
be done
before
the
event
. I am responsible for certain traditional and religious practices.
Furthermore
, I would be a great support to my parents.

I request to approve 3 weeks of my time off the studies as it is sufficient for me to travel back and forth,
also
attend the
event
. I already
checked
with the academic advisor that in these weeks
only
certain practical experiments are to
be repeated
.
Thus
, there is no
negative
impact on my studies.

I hope to hear back from you
soon
and I appreciate your understanding.

Yours
sincerely
,

Margo Wright
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IELTS letter You are studying abroad. You must return home before the end of the semester for a family event. Write a letter to your supervisor. In your letter - Explain why you need to leave early - Request time off - Reassure your professor that this will not affect your studies

Letter
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