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An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain -where did you find this information -why you want to apply this job -what qualification you have -what position you want to apply

An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain -where did you find this information -why you want to apply this job -what qualification you have -what position you want to apply 6NyN3
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply to the temporary job, which is posted on my college's official website in the job hunting section. As I have recently accomplished degree in software engineering at Centennial College, where I used to learn basics of IT field, besides I encountered complex situations as well. I noticed from your job description that you required someone who have good hands in web developing and who have expertise in web testing, which includes unit and beta testing, besides who can communicate and manage staff smoothly and sincerely. During my degree, I have learnt all programming languages ranging from C++ to Java programming, particularly designed many complex programs in Java programming such as I developed website for a local Orphanage school as my final project.
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply to the temporary job, which
is posted
on my college's official website in the job hunting section. As I have recently accomplished degree in software engineering at Centennial College, where I
used
to learn basics of IT field,
besides
I encountered complex situations
as well
. I noticed from your job description that you required someone who have
good
hands in web developing and who have expertise in web testing, which includes unit and beta testing,
besides
who can communicate and manage staff
smoothly
and
sincerely
. During my degree, I have
learnt all
programming languages ranging from C++ to Java programming,
particularly
designed
many
complex programs in Java programming such as I developed website for a local Orphanage school as my final project.
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IELTS letter An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain -where did you find this information -why you want to apply this job -what qualification you have -what position you want to apply

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  American English
1 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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