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You are planning to go and study English at school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. • Ask about the school. • Say what kind of accommodation you want. • Mention any special request you have (For example diet)

You are planning to go and study English at school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. • Ask about the school. • Say what kind of accommodation you want. • Mention any special request you have (For example diet) 1ayon

Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to ask if, I planned to next year to studying English at school overseas but I would like ask some information about the course. Firstly, I had seen newspaper about your English school overseas. I was panning for my higher studies aboard. I would like to your school to join but how to registration about their course? How many times releasing course seats? How can you find our application form? If any special discounts for students tuition fees? Our school if any arranging financial supports like loans, scholarships for overseas students? Secondly, I also need to school accommodation for my studying and Our school what kind of accommodation provided? How many rooms available in our student hostel? What kind of special facility available in our hostel? If any basic amenities like kitchens, playgrounds, gyms. Swimming pool, yoga class …. . Etc. This is a basic facility. I would like to remainder and I am a vegetarian. I maintained proper diet because I did not eat meat, fish, and chicken. If any student same character I share with room there is no smoking habits and no liquor drinks. Finally, I come to across the overseas for new comers like me let me introduced our community groups and to helpful for my life. I look to forward hearing you, Yours faithfully, R. Ram

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to ask if, I planned to next
 year to studying English at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I would like ask This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 information about the course.

Firstly
, I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 newspaper about your English You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
. I was panning for my higher studies aboard. I would like to your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 how to registration about their course? How This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times releasing course seats? How can you find our application form? If any special discounts for students tuition fees? Our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 if any arranging financial supports like loans, scholarships for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
 students?

Secondly
, I also
 need to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 accommodation for my studying and Our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstituteacademyuniversityhalljailfaculty
school
 what kind of accommodation provided? How This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 rooms available in our student hostel? What kind of special facility available in our hostel? If any basic amenities like kitchens, playgrounds, gyms. Swimming pool, yoga This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 …. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 Etc. This is a basic facility.

I would like to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).remainder, and
remainder and
 I am a vegetarian. I maintained proper diet This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I did not eat meat, fish, and chicken. If any student same character I share with room there is no smoking habits and no liquor drinks. Finally
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to across the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withawayabroadforeign
overseas
 for Did you mean "newcomers"?newcomers
new comers
 like me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me introduced our community groups and to helpful for my life.

I look to forward hearing you,

Yours faithfully
,

R. Ram