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You have written an article for a magazine about the job that you do. Write a letter to your manager to ask for his/her comments on it. - Explain why you have written this article. - Give a short description of what you have written. - Specify what particular things you want him/her to comment on

You have written an article for a magazine about the job that you do. Write a letter to your manager to ask for his/her comments on it. - Explain why you have written this article. - Give a short description of what you have written. - Specify what particular things you want him/her to comment on gYNDd

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to receive your feedback for my article which I have been asked to write for the magazine, on behalf of all the nurses. This article will be published next month in Gruhshobhika magazine. To begin with, as you are quite aware of our experience in the unit, last week we had an admission of a burn patient, who met with an accident of gas cylinder. Although our society is familiar with the handling of gas cylinders, still there is a need to provide additional knowledge. In addition to this, I thought this is the best topic to create awareness about safety measures. I mentioned that how little negligence can leads to life-threatening, safety precautions while handling gas cylinders, and how to tackle and rescue if such an emergency occurred. Kindly go through my article and make a suggestion, your precious comments will be appreciated. Yours faithfully

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 receive your feedback for my article which I have been asked
 to write for the magazine, on behalf of all the nurses. This article will be published
next
 month in Possible spelling mistake found.
Gruhshobhika
 magazine.

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begin
 with, as you are quite aware of our experience in the unit, last week we had an admission of a burn patient, who met with an accident of gas cylinder. Although our society is familiar with the handling of gas cylinders, still
 there is a need to provide additional knowledge.

In addition
 to this, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 this is the best topic to create awareness about safety measures. I mentioned that how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 negligence can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "lead"lead
leads
 to life-threatening, safety precautions while handling gas cylinders, and how to tackle and rescue if such an emergency occurred.

Kindly go through my article and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a suggestion, your precious comments will be appreciated
.

Yours faithfully