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Inviting a friend to the house warming party

Inviting a friend to the house warming party GNo0Q

Hello my new friend Lili. I am your new neighbor Marry. As you know, it has been a few days since we moved to our newborn house and unfortunately I have difficulty making friends. So I think a house warming party is will be a chance for me. Because this will give me a chance to get to know newly friends. And this is not my first move, I had to leave a lot of my friends because of some family issues. As well as I hope this will be our last change position. Don't go if you need to come home late at night, you can stay with us. If you want, you can come earlier and join the preparations. I hope the party can catch up at 20: 00, I will wait for you! come on time. Your friend Marry.

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friend
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Lili
. I am your new neighbor Marry. As you know, it has been a few days since we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to our newborn This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and unfortunately I have difficulty making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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house warming
 party is will be a chance for me. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 this will give me a chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know newly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
. And this is not my first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
, I had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friends
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 family issues. As well
 as I hope this will be our last This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 position. Don't go if you need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 home late at night, you can stay with us. If you want, you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 earlier and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 the preparations. I hope the party can catch up at 20: 00, I will wait for you! This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCome
come
 on time. Your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcolleagueacquaintancebuddyassociatecompanionroommate
friend
Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "marries".Marries
Marry
. 