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You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem

You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, say what the problem is describe the accommodation you thought you were getting ask the provider to solve the problem VJdQ

Dear Mr Watterson, My name is Andrew Fish, and I am taking an eight-week intensive English course at Oxford House College. My company is paying for my tuition, and I am using my summer vacation to study. It is expected I will pass an English Proficiency Test as a result, and be transferred abroad. Therefore, it is rather important to me that I am able to study in the best environment. I am staying in Phoenix Hostel on campus. While my room is pleasant and the facilities are very good, the hostel is extremely noisy. When I organised my accommodation, I was assured I would be staying only with post-graduate or intensive-course students. However, most of the people in this hostel are doing summer-school courses due to academic failure, and they are all under 22. It seems to me they are enjoying one long party: certainly no one observes light out or turns down music despite being asked to. I wonder if I may be moved to a hostel which is more conducive to serious study, or I may use the remainder of my accommodation fee to go towards payment for a hotel. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Andrew Fish

Dear Mr Possible spelling mistake found.Patterson
Watterson
,

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House
 College. My This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is paying for my tuition, and I am using my summer vacation to study. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 I will pass an English Proficiency This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
Test
as a result
, and be transferred
 abroad. Therefore
, it is rather
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important
 to me that I am able to study in the best environment.

I am staying in Phoenix You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinnhotel
Hostel
 on campus. While my room is pleasant and the facilities are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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good
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinnhotel
hostel
 is extremely
 noisy. When I Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 my accommodation, I was assured
 I would be staying This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 with post-graduate or intensive-course students. However
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people
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinnhotel
hostel
 are doing summer-school courses due to academic failure, and they are all under 22. It seems to me they are enjoying one long party: certainly
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.

I wonder if I may be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinnhotel
hostel
 which is more conducive to serious study, or I may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the remainder of my accommodation fee to go towards payment for a hotel.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely
,

Andrew Fish