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You are student at university and living in private accommodation and have not hot water or heating for some days

You are student at university and living in private accommodation and have not hot water or heating for some days q6Loa
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you in regards to ongoing problems with the hot water service in the apartment Shohruhobod 48/43. Since last month we had had neither hot water nor heating. Tough your workmen were sent to repair the problem, they failed and didn't come back again. And so far, this problem has not yet been solved. As the weather is getting increasingly cold, we feel not able to use cold water. Additionally, as you know heating facilities is not good. In this days I will have important exams, but every night I shiver and can't sleep very well. Luis had had a bad cold and had spent days to recover. I trust that you will consider this issue seriously and take appropriate measures. We look forward to your kind consideration. Sincerely Lilli Adam
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to you
in regards to
ongoing problems with the hot water service in the apartment
Shohruhobod
48/43.

Since last month we had had neither hot water nor heating. Tough your workmen were
sent
to repair the problem, they failed and didn't
come
back again. And
so
far, this problem has not
yet
been solved
.

As the weather is getting
increasingly
cold
, we feel not able to
use
cold
water.
Additionally
, as you know heating facilities is not
good
. In
this days
I will have
important
exams,
but
every night I shiver and can't sleep
very
well. Luis had had a
bad
cold
and had spent days to recover.

I trust that you will consider this issue
seriously
and take appropriate measures.

We look forward to your kind consideration.

Sincerely


Lilli
Adam
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IELTS letter You are student at university and living in private accommodation and have not hot water or heating for some days

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  American English
8 paragraphs
135 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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