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Thank friend for having you at their house

Thank friend for having you at their house 5b3Em
Dear Linda, For your information, I reached back home safely. I want to tell you it was a wonderful experience staying with you and your parents for the entire week. Words can't describe how grateful I am to you for inviting me over. Although we have been friends for more than a decade, we never really stayed together for more than a day. I had no idea your family is so welcoming. In fact, it was the first time I got to spend ample time with your parents and I must say they treated me like a family member. It was an unforgettable experience and I want to thank you for giving it to me. I also want to let you know how honoured I feel by the kind of hospitality you served me with. For example, you never let me cook, clean my sheets or even help you run the errands, all because you put my comfort above yours. Like I mentioned, words are not enough to express my gratitude towards you and your family. I only wish I ever get the chance to host you. It has been just a day away from your family and I have already begun to miss you all. In fact, while having dinner today, I got reminded of the little ritual we used to do together over the dining table by holding hands. I think I am now going to make it a part of my daily routine and practice it with my family too. I also miss your little dog which I think has now finally befriended me. I am sure it will remember me the next time we meet. I can't press this enough that my stay at your place was really great and I can't wait to meet you all again. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly, Samriddhi
Dear Linda,

For your information, I reached back home
safely
. I want to
tell
you it was a wonderful experience staying with you and your parents for the entire week. Words can't
describe
how grateful I am to you for inviting me over. Although we have been friends for more than a decade, we never
really
stayed together for more than a day. I had no
idea
your
family
is
so
welcoming. In fact, it was the
first
time I
got
to spend ample time with your parents and I
must
say they treated me like a
family
member. It was an unforgettable experience and I want to thank you for giving it to me.

I
also
want to
let
you know how
honoured
I feel by the kind of hospitality you served me with.
For example
, you never
let
me cook, clean my sheets or even
help
you run the errands, all
because
you put my comfort above yours. Like I mentioned, words are not
enough
to express my gratitude towards you and your
family
. I
only
wish I ever
get
the chance to host you.

It has been
just
a day away from your
family
and I have already begun to miss you all. In fact, while having dinner
today
, I
got
reminded of the
little
ritual we
used
to do together over the dining table by holding hands. I
think
I am
now
going to
make
it a part of my daily routine and practice it with my
family
too. I
also
miss your
little
dog which I
think
has
now
finally
befriended me.
I
am sure it will remember me the
next
time we
meet
.
I
can't press this
enough
that my stay at your place was
really
great and I can't wait to
meet
you all again.
I
look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
truly
,

Samriddhi
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IELTS letter Thank friend for having you at their house

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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