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Write a letter to a shop nearby and inquire about their electronic equipment.

Write a letter to a shop nearby and inquire about their electronic equipment. Bal0V
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire details on the latest and most highly equipped cameras that are available at your store. I am specifically interested in those that are designed to capture motion. My profession lies in wildlife photography, and in order to capture the lives of a variety of species; such as birds in flight and flowers in bloom, it is necessary for me to be geared with pieces of equipment that are durable, fluid in navigation and which detects movement. In addition, there is an upcoming photography summit that is scheduled for July 2022, in which I will be competing for the title of "Best Photographer" of the year. Therefore, I would greatly appreciate it if you could consider my requirements and recommend the most appropriate models and accompany each with their prices. If you could further offer their individual customer ratings, it would enable me to fasten my purchase decision. Looking forward to your favourable response urgently. Yours faithfully, Ms. Zainab Miskin
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
on the latest and most
highly
equipped cameras that are available at your store. I am
specifically
interested in those that
are designed
to capture motion.

My profession lies in wildlife photography, and in order to capture the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
of a variety of species; such as birds in flight and flowers in bloom, it is necessary for me to
be geared
with pieces of equipment that are durable, fluid in navigation and which detects movement.

In addition
, there is an upcoming photography summit that
is scheduled
for July 2022, in which I will be competing for the title of
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Best Photographer
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
of the year.
Therefore
, I would
greatly
appreciate it if you could consider my requirements and recommend the most appropriate models and accompany each with their prices. If you could
further
offer their individual customer ratings, it would enable me to fasten my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
decision.

Looking forward to your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.
favourable
response
urgently
.

Yours
faithfully
, Ms.
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Zainab
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Miskin
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a shop nearby and inquire about their electronic equipment.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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