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WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR BUS DRIVER COMPLAINING ABOUT LATE SERVICE

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Dear sir/madamI am writing this letter to you complaint about your bus service as a regular passenger of your bus. Actually before your services good and punctual. Nowadays, this last month i have been some issues with your transportation that is late of your service. I am waited for the bus half an hour too. Moreover, Has affected to the job that a three day i am late in the office they are cut my salary also. Its more affected my panctuality as well as politness. My boss scolded fo this matter and i ashamed with infront of my collegues. Eventhough, an owner managed can do solution for this problem. These days has been problem too. Tell the driver to arrive particular time or take punishment against them. Not only for me other passengers has also some complaint against your service. I am looking for your reply. Thankyou for your consideration. Yours faithfullyALINA GEORGE
Dear sir/
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madamI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing this letter to you
The word 'complaint' is a noun. Did you mean the verb "complained"?
complaint
about your bus
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
as a regular passenger of your bus. Actually
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before
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
services
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and punctual. Nowadays, this last month
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
issues with your transportation
that is
late of your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. I
am waited
for the bus half an hour too.
Moreover
, Has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
to the job that a three day
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am late in the office they are
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cut
my salary
also
. Its more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
my
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panctuality
as well
as
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politness
. My boss scolded
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fo
this matter and i ashamed with
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infront
of my
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collegues
.
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Eventhough
, an owner managed can do solution for this problem. These days
You should probably use "have", "haven".
has
been problem too.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Tell
the driver to arrive particular time or take punishment against them. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for me other passengers has
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
complaint against your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
. I am looking for your reply.
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Thankyou
for your consideration. Yours
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faithfullyALINA
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GEORGE
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IELTS letter WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR BUS DRIVER COMPLAINING ABOUT LATE SERVICE

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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