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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.

Dear sirHope you are doing well, last month i bought a laptop from your shop, but suddenly the laptop have a problem. The laptop brand name dell, which is made in china, 200 gb hard-disk, 4 gb ram, the problem on display since last week, i saw a bi problem it’s actually a bigger scratch on display, therefore, brightness is very weak, as you know the problem impact my job, I couldn’t able to send any email, further, I can’t access my official site, when I bought the laptop i have got one year warranty so i have to request to you sir, I can’t go outside for the global pandemic, that’s why i will send the laptop with DHL. After receive the lapto please change the display.

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.sir Hope
sirHope
 you are doing well, last month Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 from your shop, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
suddenly
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 brand name dell, which is made
 in Capitalize this word if you mean the country, not white porcelain.China
china
, 200 Possible spelling mistake found.GBgolbKGBGIKB
gb
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
-disk, 4 Possible spelling mistake found.GBgolbKGBGIKB
gb
 ram, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 on display since last week, Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a bi You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 it’s actually a bigger scratch on display, therefore
, brightness is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 weak, as you know the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcomplicationdilemmaquestionobstacletroubledispute
problem
 impact my job, I couldn’t able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 any email, further
, I can’t access my official site, when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
It seems that a hyphen is missing.one-year
one year
 warranty This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 request to you sir, I can’t go outside for the global pandemic, that’s why Did you mean “I”?I
i
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 with DHL. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 receive the lapto This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the display. 