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After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department.

After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. Kg2M
Dear Sir, I am writing to you in reference requesting for an internal movement to a different department within the organization. Let me explain in detail. As you are aware that I have been associated with Project Management department for three years. However, recently I have completed post-graduation diploma in sales and marketing from IMT University thus I believe it is the right time to change my role and responsibilities. Since my recently acquired educational qualification, domain knowledge and my personal interest lies with the sales, therefore, I would prefer to move to the sales department. Additionally, I believe that I would be able to use my skills and knowledge for the generating and increasing the overall revenue and profitability of the company moreover I am also aware of the existing process and workflows which will make this transition easier for the new role. I hope you grant permission for internal transfer. Yours sincerely Ben
Dear Sir,

I am writing to you in reference requesting for an internal movement to a
different
department within the organization.
Let
me
explain
in detail.

As you are aware that I have
been associated
with Project Management department for three years.
However
, recently I have completed post-graduation diploma in sales and marketing from IMT University
thus
I believe it is the right time to
change
my role and responsibilities.

Since my recently acquired educational qualification, domain knowledge and my personal interest lies with the sales,
therefore
, I would prefer to
move
to the sales department.
Additionally
, I believe that I would be able to
use
my
skills
and knowledge for the generating and increasing the
overall
revenue and profitability of the
company
moreover
I am
also
aware of the existing process and workflows which will
make
this transition easier for the new role.

I hope you grant permission for internal transfer.

Yours
sincerely


Ben
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IELTS letter After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
154 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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