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You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your immediate manager.

You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your immediate manager. BAkX

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to 12 th March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management. Despite my leave from office, I will check my emails daily, respond to important ones and be available for emergency phone calls. Besides, I have already handed over my tasks to Mr. Smith and I will be ready to assist him over call if needed. I realise my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the office but in the long run, company will be benefited from my knowledge as we have lot of projects based on financial domain. I can take up leadership roles in future as I am having expertize in finace and management. I am looking forward for your approval for the leave. Yours faithfully, Ginu Thoams

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to Did you mean "12th"?12th
12 th
 March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management.

Despite my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 from office, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my emails daily, respond to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 ones and be available for emergency phone calls. Besides
, I have already handed over my tasks to Mr. Smith and I will be ready to assist him over call if needed.

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realise
 my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the office This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in the long run, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 will be benefited
 from my knowledge as we have It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 projects based on financial domain. I can take up leadership roles in future as I am having Possible spelling mistake found.expertise
expertize
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finace
 and management.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward for your approval for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
.

Yours faithfully
,

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Ginu
Possible spelling mistake found.Thomas
Thoams

IELTS letter You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your immediate manager.

Letter

American English

7 paragraphs

150 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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