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You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your immediate manager.

You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your immediate manager. BAkX
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to 12 th March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management. Despite my leave from office, I will check my emails daily, respond to important ones and be available for emergency phone calls. Besides, I have already handed over my tasks to Mr. Smith and I will be ready to assist him over call if needed. I realise my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the office but in the long run, company will be benefited from my knowledge as we have lot of projects based on financial domain. I can take up leadership roles in future as I am having expertize in finace and management. I am looking forward for your approval for the leave. Yours faithfully, Ginu Thoams
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to seek your approval to take 2 weeks off from work, starting from 25th February to
12 th
March in order to prepare for my final year exams of my MBA course in Finance and Management.

Despite my
leave
from office, I will
check
my emails daily, respond to
important
ones and be available for emergency phone calls.
Besides
, I have already handed over my tasks to Mr. Smith and I will be ready to assist him over call if needed.

I
realise
my temporary absence could be an inconvenience to the office
but
in the long run,
company
will
be benefited
from my knowledge as we have
lot of
projects based on financial domain. I can take up leadership roles in future as I am having
expertize
in
finace
and management.

I
am looking forward for your approval for the
leave
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ginu
Thoams
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IELTS letter You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your immediate manager.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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