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After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department.

After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. 03b1
I am writing this letter to appeal you to alter my current work division. Since I have been serving water resources section for 3 years now, I have gained tremendous experience related to water resources management and therefore would like to work in another sector. My preference would be to contribute in flood forecasting center in fast-paced environment along with learning from senior engineers presently working in that division. Additionally, I am eager to gain peak flow forecasting skills to broaden my horizon. I am quite confident that a combination of my educational an professional background will make me an ideal member of the flood forecasting team. Further, recently I have undergone an Internship at flood forecasting division of Manitoba Infrastructure that inculcated competent skills in me such as working in result-oriented environment and adhering to deadlines. I would be really grateful if you consider my request of changing departments.
I am writing this letter to appeal you to alter my
current
work division. Since I have been serving water resources section for 3 years
now
, I have gained tremendous experience related to water resources management and
therefore
would like to work in another sector.

My preference would be to contribute in flood
forecasting
center in
fast
-paced environment along with learning from senior engineers
presently
working in that division.
Additionally
, I am eager to gain peak flow
forecasting
skills
to broaden my horizon.

I am quite confident that a combination of my educational
an
professional background will
make
me an ideal member of the flood
forecasting
team.
Further
, recently I have undergone an Internship at flood
forecasting
division of Manitoba Infrastructure that inculcated competent
skills
in me such as working in result-oriented environment and adhering to deadlines.

I would be
really
grateful if you consider my request of changing departments.
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IELTS letter After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
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