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After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department.Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department.

After working in your department for over 3 years, you feel the need to switch your department. Write a letter to your boss requesting a change in the department. 03b1

I am writing this letter to appeal you to alter my current work division. Since I have been serving water resources section for 3 years now, I have gained tremendous experience related to water resources management and therefore would like to work in another sector. My preference would be to contribute in flood forecasting center in fast-paced environment along with learning from senior engineers presently working in that division. Additionally, I am eager to gain peak flow forecasting skills to broaden my horizon. I am quite confident that a combination of my educational an professional background will make me an ideal member of the flood forecasting team. Further, recently I have undergone an Internship at flood forecasting division of Manitoba Infrastructure that inculcated competent skills in me such as working in result-oriented environment and adhering to deadlines. I would be really grateful if you consider my request of changing departments.

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, I have gained tremendous experience related to water resources management and therefore
 would like to work in another sector.

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-paced environment along with learning from senior engineers presently
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 to broaden my horizon.

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 professional background will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me an ideal member of the flood You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeseecalculateconcludeanticipateportendforetell
forecasting
 team. Further
, recently I have undergone an Internship at flood You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforeseecalculateconcludeanticipateportendforetell
forecasting
 division of Manitoba Infrastructure that inculcated competent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in me such as working in result-oriented environment and adhering to deadlines.

I would be really
 grateful if you consider my request of changing departments. 