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write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.

write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things. Akq1
Dear Mr smith, I am writing this letter to let you know that I have stayed at your hotel last night and I forget to take my belonging with me. My name is jobanjeet singh and I have stayed in room no 709 on Thursday night 22/02/2021. Actually I was in rush to check out from hotel that I left my wedding ring and the key of my office room. These two things are really important to me especially my wedding ring. My wife would be so upset if she come to know about this. And the office key is very important as well because boss have only one key and that key he give to me. he would be very angry when he would find out about this one. Please mr smith try to find these thing and you can send through parcel on this address 20 whitmore road, mt roskill, Auckland. I will pay for parcel. Yours sincerely, Jobanjeet singh
Dear Mr smith,

I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I have stayed at your hotel last night and I forget to take my belonging with me. My name is
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jobanjeet
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singh
and I have stayed in room no 709 on Thursday night 22/02/2021. Actually I was in rush to
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check
out from hotel that I
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left
my wedding ring and the
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key
of my office room.

These two things are
really
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to me
especially
my wedding ring. My wife would be
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so
upset if she
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come
to know about this. And the office
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key
is
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very
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important
as well
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because
boss have
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only
one
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key
and that
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key
he
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give
to me. he would be
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very
angry when he would find out about this one.

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Please
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mr
smith try to find
Did you mean "this thing" or "these things"?
these thing
and you can
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through parcel on this address 20
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whitmore
road, mt
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roskill
, Auckland. I will pay for parcel.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Jobanjeet
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singh

IELTS letter write a letter to the manager of a hotel where you stayed and left two important things.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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