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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself. aGYm
Dear Aunt Marie, How are you? I hope you are doing well. It was 3 years ago since we last met each other at the wedding of Angela. I wanted to let you know that my company will be conducting its annual conference in your town. The conference will be held at Prestige Hotel, it is a full day event, starting at 7: 30 in the morning till 6 in the evening. I would like to ask if I can stay at your place? The gotel accommodation is expensive and the company does not include it in the budget. I would pay for my stay at your home and do some household chores for you not to worry about the mess I have done while staying at your place. If you insist that I should not pay for my accommodation, I would like to treat you and your family to a dinner for welcoming me at your home. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Best regards, Mikee
Dear Aunt Marie, How are you? I hope you are doing well. It was 3 years ago since we last met each other at the wedding of Angela. I wanted to
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you know that my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
will be conducting its annual conference in your town.

The conference will
be held
at Prestige Hotel, it is a full day
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event
, starting at 7: 30 in the morning till 6 in the evening. I would like to ask if I can stay at your place? The
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gotel
accommodation is expensive and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
does not include it in the budget.

I would pay for my stay at your home and do
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some
household chores for you not to worry about the mess I have done while staying at your place. If you insist that I should not pay for my accommodation, I would like to treat you and your family to a dinner for welcoming me at your home.

I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you.

Best regards,
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Mikee

IELTS letter You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: • Explain when and how long you will be in town. • Ask whether you can stay at their home. • Offer to pay for yourself.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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