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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract.

Dear concerned, My name is Nabeel Maqsood and I am, currently, a tenant in one of your flats, located on Mall Road, Lahore. I rented out the place on the eve of April 2019 and moved in before the end of May 2019. First of all, I would like to commend the property and service provided by your agency, which truly lived upto its promise. But, the reason of this letter is to inform you that i won't be taking up residence anymore, and would like to terminate our residency agreement in March 2020, which is two months early than our agreed time period of contract. I will be obliged if your agency can start the processing of my request as early as possible, therefore, i may leave on time as per my schedule. The reason of my early departure is that I have been promoted by my current employer, only on the promise that i move to Karachi and manage their firm's branch. I did not want to let this opportunity go to waste as these days a promotion of this scale and benefits occur once in an blue moon. Overall, once again I would like to thank you, in advance, for the quality services provided by your firm and for the acceptance of my request. Your faithfully Nabeel Maqsood

Dear concerned,

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before
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of May 2019.

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First of all
, I would like to commend the property and service provided by your agency, which truly
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lived
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upto
 its promise. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the reason of this letter is to inform you that Did you mean “I”?I
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 won't be taking up residence anymore, and would like to terminate our residency agreement in March 2020, which is two months early than our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 time period of contract. I will be obliged
 if your agency can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the processing of my request as early as possible, therefore
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leave
 on time as per my schedule.

The reason of my early departure is that I have been promoted
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current
 employer, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 on the promise that Is this the personal pronoun “I”? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to Karachi and manage their firm's branch. I did not want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 this opportunity go to waste as these days a promotion of this scale and benefits occur once in Use “a” instead of ‘an’ if the following word doesn’t start with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘a sentence’, ‘a university’.a
an
 blue moon.

Overall
, once again I would like to thank you, in advance, for the quality services provided by your firm and for the acceptance of my request.

Your faithfully


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Maqsood