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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

Dear sir or madam, I was gone with my family in restaurant that is situated in one of the most famous food street for dinner. Due to the choice of my younger brother, It is favourite place of my brother that's the thing we were here to eaten some special food. When we were order the some dishes. first thing the order delivery was too late. After we received order when we eaten chicken, Smell was producing from it and all the thing that we were ordered like a unhygienic food. But the staff was not agreed to accept them. At the we called manager for investigate about food. We want a restrict action again his staff and chief because they were not providing a good quality of food and serving of food. If manager did not take any action then I will call to food legal authority and complain against you and your restaurant. So we want action because in future you and your staff do not repeat any mistake about food.
Dear sir or madam,

I was
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gone with
my family in restaurant that
is situated
in one of the most
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famous
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food
street for dinner. Due to the choice of my younger brother, It is
Possible spelling mistake. ‘favourite’ is British English.
favourite
place of my brother that's the thing we were here to
The verb after “to” should be in the base form: “eat”.
eaten
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some
special food.

“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
we were order the
Did you mean “same”?
some
dishes.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
first
thing the order delivery was too late. After we received order when we
You used a past participle without using any required verb (‘be’ or ‘have’).
eaten
chicken, Smell was producing from it and all the thing that we
were ordered
like
Use “an” instead of ‘a’ if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. ‘an article’, ‘an hour’.
a
unhygienic
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food
.
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But
the staff was not
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agreed
to accept them. At
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the we
called manager for investigate about food.

We want a restrict action again his staff and chief
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because
they were not providing a
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good
quality of
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food
and serving of
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food
. If manager did not take any action then I will call to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
legal authority and complain against you and your restaurant.
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So
we want action
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because
in future you and your staff do not repeat any mistake about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.

IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.