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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Smith, I am David your new neighbor. Recently, I came to live on second floor of this building. Actually, it came into my notice that due to some noise in my flat generate a trouble for you. As a matter of facts, there are some issues related to this new apartment. Firstly, it's water leaking in the drainage system. Secondly, this flat need some renovation like repairing some kitchen cabinets predominantly, the door locks are also not in better condition. Apparently, as you know it takes some days to complete. I really apologize in this situation but I request that you just endure for one week. Principally, I will try that the workers will start the work during your working hours like morning at 8: 00 and complete it till noon 1: 00. Hopefully, you can understand my position realized my station. If any other issue please contact with me. Kindly Regards, Yours Sincerely,
Dear Smith,

I am David your new neighbor. Recently, I came to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
on second floor of this building.

Actually, it came into my notice that due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
noise in my flat generate a trouble for you. As a matter of facts, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
issues related to this new apartment.
Firstly
, it's water leaking in the drainage system.
Secondly
, this flat need
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
renovation like repairing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
kitchen cabinets
predominantly
, the door locks are
also
not in better condition.
Apparently
, as you know it takes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
days to complete.

I
really
apologize in this situation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I request that you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
endure for one week.
Principally
, I will try that the workers will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the work during your working hours like morning at 8: 00 and complete it till noon 1: 00.

Hopefully
, you can understand my position realized my station.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
any other issue
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
contact with me.

Kindly Regards,

Yours
Sincerely
,

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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