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Letter for acceptance for job

Dear John, I’m grateful to receive your letter last week with the big surprise of a job offer in your company. I been dreaming to work in your organization from ages. We both tried for this job in our campus and you were the lucky one to get it. I can’t wait to join the company which is in top 100 Fortune and has the best work life balance policy in the industry. The best part is the compensation which they are offering and the health care facility they have for their employees. As you are aware that I am currently working with XYZ ltd and they have a strict policy for notice period. For that they have signed a bond which I can’t breach it. I will proudly accept the offer from your company and will be very happy to join you but by three months that is by end of May 2021. Can’t wait to work with you and will be like old college days. Your faithfully Tom
Dear John,

I’m grateful to receive your letter last week with the
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big
surprise of a job offer in your
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company
. I
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been
dreaming to work in your organization from ages. We both tried for this job in our
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campus and
you were the lucky one to
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get
it.

I can’t wait to
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join
the
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company
which is in top 100 Fortune and has the best
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work life
balance policy in the industry. The best part is the compensation which they are offering and the health care facility they have for their employees.

As you are aware that I am
currently
working with XYZ
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ltd and
they have a strict policy for notice period. For that they have signed a bond which I can’t breach it.

I will
proudly
accept the offer from your
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company
and will be
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very
happy to
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join
you
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but
by three months
that is
by
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end
of May 2021. Can’t wait to work with you and will be like
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old
college days.

Your
faithfully


Tom

IELTS letter Letter for acceptance for job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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