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Letter for acceptance for job

Dear John, I’m grateful to receive your letter last week with the big surprise of a job offer in your company. I been dreaming to work in your organization from ages. We both tried for this job in our campus and you were the lucky one to get it. I can’t wait to join the company which is in top 100 Fortune and has the best work life balance policy in the industry. The best part is the compensation which they are offering and the health care facility they have for their employees. As you are aware that I am currently working with XYZ ltd and they have a strict policy for notice period. For that they have signed a bond which I can’t breach it. I will proudly accept the offer from your company and will be very happy to join you but by three months that is by end of May 2021. Can’t wait to work with you and will be like old college days. Your faithfully Tom

Dear John,

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 college days.

Your faithfully


Tom