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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter • give details of the camera and where you bought it • explain what has happened • say what you want him/her to do about it

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in reference to the camera which I bought from one of your stores. My friend recommended me to get a camera from your company since you sell the best cameras. Unfortunately, the package is missing some essential parts. On January 10, 2021, I bought a black colored Cannon 360 HD model camera with a grey strap to hand around the neck. The retailer told me that it came with two spare batteries. Since it was out of stock in most of your stores, I had to travel all the way to Norman Street which is a one-hour drive from my house to purchase this camera. I received the camera in a sealed box therefore, I did not think of un-boxing it to check if it contained all its parts. It was not until I had arrived at my hotel, I was shocked to see that the batteries were missing from the package. I am extremely disappointed, as I was looking forward to taking pictures for my blog. You are requested to kindly look into the matter and take the required action along with a refund. Yours sincerely, Ifrah.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in reference to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from one of your stores. My friend recommended me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 since you sell the best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
cameras
. Unfortunately, the package is missing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 essential parts.

On January 10, 2021, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a black colored Cannon 360 HD model You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 with a Possible spelling mistake. ‘grey’ is British English.gray
grey
 strap to hand around the neck. The retailer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that it came with two spare batteries. Since it was out of stock in most of your stores, I had to travel all the way to Norman Street which is a one-hour drive from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 this camera.

I received the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 in a sealed box therefore
, I did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of Possible spelling mistake found.unboxing
un-boxing
 it to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 if it contained all its parts. It was not until I had arrived at my hotel, I was shocked
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the batteries were missing from the package.

I am extremely
 disappointed, as I was looking forward to taking pictures for my blog. You are requested
 to kindly look into the matter and take the required action along with a refund.

Yours sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.If rah
Ifrah
. 