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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Smith, I am David, your new neighbor. Recently, moved in your neighborhood. Paramount important to discuss with you the matter which was created from my side. I have been notify that due to the noise generation in my flat it has trouble you past a week. As a matter of facts, the flat was under reconstruction and there was drainage system issue and there title of ground were being installed due to that noise were over created so apparently, this was the reason and it take time to complete the task. I really apologize in this situation but I request that you just endure for one week. Principally, I will try that the workers will start the work during your working hours like morning at 8: 00 and complete it till noon 1: 00. Hopefully, you can understand my position realized my station. If any other issue please contact with me. Kindly Regards, Yours Sincerely,
Dear Smith,

I am David, your new neighbor. Recently,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
in your neighborhood. Paramount
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to discuss with you the matter which
was created
from my side.

I have been
Consider using either the past participle “notified” or the present participle “notifying” here.
notify
that due to the noise generation in my flat it has trouble you past a week. As a matter of facts, the flat was under reconstruction and there was drainage system issue and there title of ground were
being installed
due to that noise were over created
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
apparently
, this was the
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
reason and
it
After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “takes”.
take
time to complete the task.

I
really
apologize in this situation
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I request that you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
endure for one week.
Principally
, I will try that the workers will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
the work during your working hours like morning at 8: 00 and complete it till noon 1: 00.

Hopefully
, you can understand my position realized my station.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
any other issue
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
contact with me.

Kindly Regards,

Yours
Sincerely
,

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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