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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. BVRp
Dear Sir/Madam, I am Ritika and I am living in the apartment number 498 of the 99 Dalhousie building in south, Winnipeg, Manitoba. Here, I am living from last six months. I would like to inform you that I have to move from this flat before one month early because I find a new job in Toronto, Ontario. My contract with your agency will ends on 31st December 2022 but I have to moved one month before the ending of contract because I will go there in advanced to sign some paper related to my job and my job will starts on first week of January. I am terribly sorry, but I have to break this contract one month early, as I mentioned you in above my job will starts on 5th January 2023. I aware from that it is not easy even for you but I am very thankfull, if you could release me from it early. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am
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Ritika and
I am living in the apartment number 498 of the 99
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Dalhousie
building in south, Winnipeg, Manitoba. Here, I am living from last six months.

I would like to inform you that I
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move
from this flat
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before
one month early
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because
I find a new
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job
in Toronto, Ontario. My contract with your agency will
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ends
on 31st December 2022
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I
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moved
one month
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before
the ending of contract
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because
I will go there in advanced to
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sign
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some
paper related to my
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job
and my
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job
will
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starts
on
first
week of January.

I am
terribly
sorry,
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but
I
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have to
break this contract one month early, as I mentioned you in above my
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job
will
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starts
on 5th January 2023. I aware from that it is not easy even for you
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but
I am
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thankfull
, if you could release me from it early.

Yours
faithfully
,

IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
160 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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